2013-03-17

Hi guys--

Here's what I've revised on the Critic!Attempted Suicide fanfic so far, and I'm liking the changes. Dialogue on what exactly I've decided to change is elaborated on is in the second cut; the first cut is what I've added, cut, and revised so far, based on what I read in the feedback I skimmed. If you'd like, read it and let me know what you think.

TRIGGER WARNINGS for self-harm, suicide ideation, animal cruelty, and wangst still apply, as well as my usual Modus Operandi of "When I Go Dark, I Go For Broke." Please use discretion when reading.

Fanfic Revision, Part 1 )

List of Changes: )

So that's all for tonight. Is this better, or worse? Are there general suggestions you have that I should keep in mind as I continue to edit, or little grammatical errors that I missed? Please let me know, and again--thank you so much for the help, if you decide to give it. Getting concrit is never easy, but I truly do believe it's making me be a better writer.

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