2013-03-18

Revision time again! Less tonight, because I had a business meeting to attend. This is one of the major parts I'm rewriting.

...Would it be easier for everyone to read it all in one go, and then respond to that draft? Or would you like me to post the parts as I edit them? ...I'm eager for feedback of any kind, yes, but I can wait. And post about...other stuff.

...Anyway, here it is. If you have time, please read it and let me know if it's any better or worse. Most of this is new material taking place of some old cut stuff.
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