2013-03-20

 Okay, so "Terrible Idea" has now become "draft workshop," because workshopping is the best thing to call it.  I've taken some of the feedback I've been given and incorporated it into a new and improved draft, and I've decided that even though part of me still wants people to poke fun at things that don't make sense, or spork it, I want something that will make me a better writer.

I'm looking for the same thing as before:  Simple honesty.

What needs to be changed, and what needs to stay the same?  What needs to be added, subtracted, or multiplied?  Is this version superior, or inferior to, my first draft?

...If you have ANY new feedback--any at all--I would appreciate it.  ...This story is important to me, and I want it to be good.  ...It HAS to be good, considering the subject matter I'm tackling about a controversial part of the fandom.  I know what I'm getting myself into.  

At the same time, though...I really feel like this is a breakthrough fic for me.  Like--if I can cinch this, I'll reach a new level of writing.  This was like writing What the Heart Forgets, or Armfuls of Daffodils.  Except this time, I'm doing this because it's important to me.

Draft will be in the next post.

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